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Inspiration

Post by graves95 » Thu Apr 16, 2015 7:20 am

Here is a little piece done entirely in dialogue that I hope you enjoy. Deliberately gender non-specific.

Inspiration

By Jonathan Quincy Graves

“Perhaps you just need a little inspiration.”

“I’m sorry; what did you say?”

“I said, ‘perhaps you just need a little inspiration.’ You’ve been sitting at that computer for the past hour and a half ignoring me, and muttering about something just not coming together. I assume that you are working on another of those stupid spanking stories. Am I right?”

“Yes, well trying to work, but for some reason, I just can’t get this one down on paper. It’s really frustrating when my mind does this and I absolutely cannot get the words to flow the way I want them to.”

“Well, like I said, perhaps you just need a little inspiration.”

“Yeah, you said that, but what did you mean by it?”

“I mean, that maybe if you received a good spanking, you might find it a whole lot easier to write about spankings.”

“I still don’t get it. You’ve never been interested in spanking before.”

“Maybe that’s because I’ve never wanted you to spank me, and you’ve never asked me to spank you. I’m tired of being ignored though, and I’m becoming more and more interested in the subject. The idea of baring that little fanny of yours over my knee and giving it a good dose of the hairbrush is starting to seem real attractive to me.”

“I’ve never seen you like this. We’ve been married for six years now, and in all that time you’ve never once mentioned that you might like to engage in a little corporal punishment.”

“I’m starting to wonder whether that has been time wasted. Perhaps with a little domestic discipline on a regular basis, you might spend a little less time making love to that damned computer. And, as I said, perhaps a spanking will reawaken your muse; it will surely awaken your bottom.”

“I’ve never actually been spanked before.”

“Really? All those stories that you’ve written and posted and you’ve never been spanked? Not even by your parents when you were little?”

“No, they didn’t believe in it.”

“How the hell did you get hooked on this spanking fetish then if you’ve never been spanked? Ever seen anyone spanked?”

“Nope.”

“Ever given someone else a good spanking?”

“Never.”

“Well this is just ridiculous. A person cannot expect to write well about something of which they know nothing.”

“I’ve read lots of stories and personal accounts on the internet, you know.”

“I see. That surely makes you an expert. You’ve read lots of stories on the internet. And you know for a fact that the people who wrote those stories are very experienced in real life. Much more experienced than you, for example. And that their accounts are therefore entirely accurate. You know this because you’ve actually met these people.”

“Well, I haven’t actually met them, but in their accounts…”

“Oh, of course, they mention their spankers or witnesses that you’ve actually met and talked to. Now I understand.”

“You don’t have to get sarcastic about it. I haven’t actually met anyone who is into spanking one way or the other, but there are so many stories out there that some of them have to be based in real life, don’t they?”

“How many spanking stories have you written so far?”

“I don’t know, more than a dozen.”

“I rest my case. Now, don’t you think that it is about time that you gained some actual real life experience?”

“You’re serious; you are actually proposing to spank me.”

“You bet your sweet little tushy I am. In fact, I’m going to go fetch a good solid hairbrush, and I expect you to be naked from the waist down by the time I get back.”

“Sounds embarrassing. I’m not sure…”

“That does it. Ears make the best handles in cases like this. Come with me and we’ll find that hairbrush together.”

“Ouch, no wait…”

“No dear, there is no need to wait, there is the hairbrush right where I last saw it. Now, over my lap you go and we’ll get this little production under way.”

“There, how does that feel? Have I got your attention yet?”

“Ow, damn that really stings.”

“Tut, tut, language, my dear. You don’t want me to have to wash your mouth out with soap before I put you into the corner after I’m done blistering your bottom do you? Now, where was I? Ah yes, I remember. Perhaps a few more on this cheek, a little harder this time.”

“No! Ouch! Not there! Don’t!! Stop!!”

“Don’t stop? Don’t worry; I’m not close to stopping yet. Your bottom is turning a nice shade of pink, but it’s not quite red enough yet. Besides, it’s a little uneven. A few more over here… and a few more over there… Yes, this is definitely looking much better.”

“Please, I’ve had enough. I’ve learned my lesson. Please s-stop.”

“I don’t know what you mean, dear. This isn’t about lessons, this is about inspiration. And, I confess, it’s also about enjoyment. I’m enjoying the hell out spanking this little bare bottom; but your kicking and squirming is getting a little out of hand. Let me see now, in your stories when this happens you just have your spanker drape one leg over the backs of the penitent’s legs like this. Yes, this seems to do the trick. We’ll just take care of this interfering hand... That should do it; I think we can continue safely now. Hold on tight dear, the real punishment is about to begin.”

“No. Ow! Stop! Stop! I’m sorry. I’ll do whatever you want; just please stop.”

“There now. That wasn’t so bad was it? Well, maybe it was for you. I’ve never felt a bottom that was this red and hot before. This is really interesting. We will definitely have to do this again real soon.”

“No, never again. Ow! Ouch! Okay, okay, you can spank me whenever you want. Just please stop for now.”

“Of course dear. I’d be happy to stop. Just as long as we are in agreement about future sessions when I think that they are necessary. We are in agreement, aren’t we dear?”

“Ouch! Yes, yes, we’re in agreement.”

“Good. I thought that you might see it my way. Now tell me; do you feel inspired to finish that story and then go out to dinner with me tonight?”

“Absolutely. Whatever you would like.”

“Good. That’s what I like to hear. Now get to it so we can go out, or I really will put you in the corner.”

“Yes dear. And, I love you.”

“Love you too, dear, but that won’t save that little tushy of yours the next time you’re naughty.”

“I wouldn’t have it any other way.”

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Re: Inspiration

Post by tk04 » Tue Apr 28, 2015 9:43 am

Left a lot to the imagination, but I liked it. Nicely done.

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Re: Inspiration

Post by 2old4that » Wed Apr 29, 2015 1:29 pm

Not so gender neutral IMHO A man never drags a woman by the ear.

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Re: Inspiration

Post by hairbrushedhubby » Thu May 14, 2015 6:57 am

A very good story, well done.

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