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Whispers

Post by redzonedefense_F » Fri May 01, 2015 12:01 pm

The twinge of anxiety as I approach

The mantra channeled “He needs this. He needs this. He needs this.”

The whispered plan resonating in your ear

The look of momentary confusion before realization dawns

The short walk back to private space that feels like miles

The sharp, carefully-chosen words

The mournful glance when no reprieve comes

The familiar sound of belt buckles and zippers

The soft lap that awaits

The anxious shifting in the final moments of anticipation

The solemn promise

The rhythmic echoes

The battle of wills

The hand that falls with increased tempo, certainty

The first tears

The resistance faltering

The plaintive pleas

The decision made to let go, to trust

The physical, mental and emotional tension released

The regret pouring out

The stilled hand, resting

The reassuring voice amidst the sobs

The time stopped, wrapped in an embrace

The peace
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IMSOMEAN
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Re: Whispers

Post by IMSOMEAN » Fri May 01, 2015 12:17 pm

loved this

redzonedefense_F
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Re: Whispers

Post by redzonedefense_F » Fri May 01, 2015 1:14 pm

Praise from one of my favorite authors ... much appreciated

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Re: Whispers

Post by skyhawk » Sun May 03, 2015 4:07 pm

Simply wonderful.

So much said in so few words, leaving each reader to recall or fantasize their own personal experience.

redzonedefense_F
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Re: Whispers

Post by redzonedefense_F » Mon May 04, 2015 1:14 pm

Thank you, skyhawk. I am humbled.

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Re: Whispers

Post by subdanny » Wed May 20, 2015 12:14 pm

wonderfull :)

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