well done. her submissive side is exsquisite as well. i personally have been out of that kind of it for a long time, but it totally brought be back and your writing made if feel ever so real. thank you
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Re: 'Turnabout' A Follow Up to My First Attempt (Fantasy)
another great descriptive. i like the "turnabout" well done.
her submissive side is exsquisite as well. i personally have been out of that kind of it for a long time, but it totally brought be back and your writing made if feel ever so real. thank you
well done. her submissive side is exsquisite as well. i personally have been out of that kind of it for a long time, but it totally brought be back and your writing made if feel ever so real. thank you
Re: 'Turnabout' A Follow Up to My First Attempt (Fantasy)
Thanx Piper,
This is not exactly my scene, well some aspects are. It was written partially to a 'friend's' suggested specifications.
Glad you liked it though. More to come if I can find 'em.
RICH
This is not exactly my scene, well some aspects are. It was written partially to a 'friend's' suggested specifications.
Glad you liked it though. More to come if I can find 'em.
RICH
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