A nice story. I would have preferred an ending where she's watching TV with her family & friends, and her spanking comes on in the form of a commercial.
Sure, she hadn't agreed to it, but you have to admit it would be fabulous exposure!
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- Mon Jan 03, 2011 3:15 am
- Forum: New Spanking Stories
- Topic: The Making of the Candi Video -Sylvan Story
- Replies: 3
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- Mon Jan 03, 2011 3:10 am
- Forum: New Spanking Stories
- Topic: Who knew? Attempt at a very short story
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Re: Who knew? Attempt at a very short story
I quite like this -- using a repeated structure, almost like verse, to do a slow reveal of the desired information. Plus a nice twist at the end -- good job!