You have done it again. No, this time you've outdone yourself, with more turns than an L.A. freeway multiple cloverleaf. Passion, tenderness, a very touching, moving backstory, and enough revelations to fill another chapter of their own.

Aha! You're back to writing again. Uh, you mean the Earth isn't flat? That means someone's going to be spanked.

The wait for the next part is excruciating.

That was great, StarrFyre. Scout acted up just a little too much for Sera's patience, and we all know what happens to naughty little girls. Sera is awesome, and I suspect she wouldn't be totally out of place in your previous works. I'll bet that cell phone rings before long, and who could blame her ...

This can get very interesting in short order. Emma has entered a whole new phase of her life, and as for Joe and Nina, the same holds true. Keep going, David.

Terrific news, I'm looking forward to it.

This was very well done, it was both sensual and erotic, with tenderness and a great setting. I'm looking forward to reading more about this couple.

Minnie, you're amazing. Now I'm curious about your other writing, too. Keep up the great work.

Oh the aftercare is so necessary and delightful.

Good heavens, you certainly have the twists and turns in your story, miss. Hot? Darned right it is. If the phone hadn't rung, the desk may well have caught fire!