Gulf: I've been a journalist & writer of mainstream fiction for over 25 years. The story above was my first attempt at THIS type type of fiction. I posted it here for entertainment purposes, not to win a Pulitzer. I'm sure my knowledge of structure & format is more than adequate. Thanx anywa...

Truly mesmerizing, Psyche.. I loved it. I do hope you'll continue to share your talents with us.

Thanx Piper,
This is not exactly my scene, well some aspects are. It was written partially to a 'friend's' suggested specifications.
Glad you liked it though. More to come if I can find 'em.
RICH

To Psyche: Glad I could help you expand your horizons.. I'd be glad to volunteer.. ; )

To Piper: Thanx for the good review. This was indeed my first attempt at this type of writing although I've been writing all my life. I have a few more that I'll post if I can find them.

Wow, very well written, Piper. Sounds like a very rewarding & satisfying relationship. I'm happy for you.

Excellent.. I do hope you'll continue to share your talents with us.

Marvelous.. Bravo, Psyche. I do hope you continue to share your tremendous talent with us.

Excellent. I was enthralled. And.. a little jealous.