I enjoyed that very much! Thanks for sharing with us.

I'm looking forward to reading more!

I am enjoying this series! Thanks for sharing with us.

I enjoyed it very much. Thank you!

Thanks! I enjoyed this very much.

Loved it! Thanks for sharing it with us. I look forward to reading more.

Thank you for your hard work! I enjoyed my quick visit to Emily's world and look forward to part 2. My suggestions mirror the others, punctuation, capitalization and paragraphing will make this much more enjoyable to read. Keep writing!

Loved it!

I'm enjoying the story line and characters. I hope more follows!

I agree, well done!