Thats very nice of you to say, badgirl. I think I am losing some of the "hominess" in this series. I will have to get back to that. I must admit that its the kind of home I wish I could live in too. I guess some of us just need the extra accountability

I was scared silly. It has been a month since Tiffany, the coolest girl here at Smith Academy Boarding School, was broken. Miss Burns was certainly making good on her threat to change things. It wasn't the carefree party school it was last year. The mood was more sombre. Us kids are a lot more fearf...

[This is the latest installment of the Structure and Accountability series. If you like it feel free to read my other stories as well] Today is turning into one of the longest months of my life. Jessie invited me over to her house for a party. Of course I accepted. she always has good parties. But t...

yes that was too many swats. Half that would have been enough. I will have to be more careful about the realism

(This is part 8 of a continuing series of stories involving Rachel, a 19 year old college girl who has just been put on academic probation for bad grades. She has just agreed to move in with "Uncle Richard" who has been providing structure and accountability to young ladies like her for a ...

I am sure that many kids fantasized about this exact scenario when school CP was outlawed in England. Turnabout can be fair play sometimes

Nervously, I waited at the rendezvous point. Eventually, the don's caddy limo pulled up beside me. Francis, his fixer, and Rachel, his enforcer, stepped out of the car first. Francis, bald and stocky, looked pissed off. He always does. "Look," I said, "I'm good for the money. I just n...

It is a good start but I must admit that I found it disjointed. First of all, you spent a good deal of time telling your readers about earier escapades. Instead, you need to show it somehow. Remember the old screenwriter adage to always "show don't tell". Another thing is that there seemed...

This was well wrth the wait. Very good, sir

yes i can see them becoming friends. maybe even co conspirators somehow. I was going to have them meet again and discuss what heppened while splitting an ice cream but i wanted the story over with. This story was very hard for me to write. I usually have a caring disciplinarian in my stories but thi...