Having loved your previous story and checked out your profile, may I say how refreshing it is to see such an honest, open and understanding person here. (yes, there are many more too , I know).

look at the queue!!!

WOW - brilliant piece of writing to put the reader right there, very appropriate title too!

Wow. Thoroughly enjoyed that thanks :) And coming from a spankee!!!!! Sounds like you'd make an excellent Domme too. Anyway, well written, a great imagination and if I may suggest you couple that with your experiences your stories will get better and better. Good luck and enjoy writing for your self...

Always nice when a lady gets so much pleasure from dishing it out! I don't suppose her conscience will prick, but if it does perhaps she could confess to the head and receive what Mary would have got.

Another nice story thank you. Almost wish I had a boss like Debbie

It felt awkward being in that kitchen but an undeterred Jane asked "Well what are we going to do about last night Laura?" "Oh Mum. I'm 21 now, come on" "What do you think Alex?" asked Jane. God, don't bring me into this I thought but answered, "Laura's old enough t...

Why was I nervous as, clad in cream coloured chinos and yellow shirt, I knocked on the door? Butterflies were working overtime in tummy at the thought of what happened here a few days earlier but I had little time to dwell on that as the door opened and an already tipsy Laura jumped at me and hugged...

It was 7am and the roads were quiet as I was driving to work. I approached a set of temporary traffic lights at some roadworks which just changed to red, so I slowed and stopped, glancing in the mirror seeing another car about 100 yards back. I sat and waited listening to Classic FM when suddenly I ...

Go for it! You've set the scene nicely so just take it from there and write for the pleasure of writing