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by PAmansfirmhand
Sat Nov 29, 2014 7:44 pm
Forum: New Spanking Stories
Topic: Dirty Dishes
Replies: 6
Views: 7528

Re: Dirty Dishes

Very well written story and a template for writers of spanking stories. Establish the reason for the spanking. Share the spanking/aftermath. And end the story. Kudos!
by PAmansfirmhand
Sat Feb 01, 2014 10:28 pm
Forum: New Spanking Stories
Topic: Cindy's day in court
Replies: 1
Views: 4151

Re: Cindy's day in court

Well, I see a little lady was raped today. I hope that you keep stories such as this to yourself.
by PAmansfirmhand
Mon Jan 06, 2014 1:14 pm
Forum: New Spanking Stories
Topic: The Blushing Prima Donna - a true story
Replies: 2
Views: 4415

Re: The Blushing Prima Donna - a true story

A screenwriter learns early on that a scene is best when you enter into it at the last possible moment and let an educated audience presume what came before. While your true life tale centers on a play rather than a film, it would have benefited if you had left much of the back-story out. A strong b...
by PAmansfirmhand
Fri Dec 06, 2013 6:49 pm
Forum: New Spanking Stories
Topic: Spanked by Daddy m/f
Replies: 1
Views: 5765

Re: Spanked by Daddy m/f

Enjoyed your story. Well-done.
by PAmansfirmhand
Fri Dec 06, 2013 6:47 pm
Forum: New Spanking Stories
Topic: The Exchange Student
Replies: 9
Views: 13752

Re: The Exchange Student

Another good writer. A very good spanking story.

Establish your premise. Say what you want to say. And end your story.

A simple, successful recipe for an excellent spanking story.
by PAmansfirmhand
Fri Dec 06, 2013 6:31 pm
Forum: New Spanking Stories
Topic: First spankings at 14 F/ffff F/ff
Replies: 2
Views: 10153

Re: First spankings at 14 F/ffff F/ff

One of the best stories this site has seen in a long time. Well-written, properly paced, manageable paragraphs and believable. Reminds me of a longer version of the great spanking stories that once were published in Original Letters magazine about parental discipline. Haven't seen that magazine in y...