Great imagination and very well written, especially for your first attempt. You should consider writing more and selling the stories to mags like Scarlett Hill, Shadow Lane, etc

Very well done .....Am waiting for the second chapter .....

I read all of the stories here---some are good---others not so good but I bet yours would be good.

PS You should correct your profile (you're not 18, are you?) and complete it so people would know you better.

Great follow up to parts 1 & 2. Louise is quite a lady. Don't think I could take the cane, tho.

Very well written, sweetcheeks2. Hope to see more from you---maybe another meeting with your new acquaintance?

Patti is quite a lady---Would love to meet her

Very well done, Lex. Do we get the third segment of the Adventures of Julie and Alex soon??

Nice story and well written. If I were Alex, I'd probably wait awhile (to recover) and in another week would be back out smoking a joint again .

Marvelous story----There must be more to come----I look forward to it

Don't know what it looked like before but it's very readable now. Good story!