Good start, I'm anxious to see where the story goes.

I think it is well written. You did a good job setting the scene and conveying the emotions of the narrator.

This story is a work of fiction. The names are made up. The town is a real place but I have never been there, I picked it off a list of cities in Alabama. This story is presented for your enjoyment, comments are always welcomed and if there is enough interest I will be happy to work on and post stor...