Beside's Los Angeles, I really want to see where this is going! Would love it if the "recipients" of all the spanking attention were a bit older, however! I mean, why write a new law and then go back to spanking minors? Just a thought!

Well done, well told! Thanks for sharing!

As always, your story was well-formulated and well told! You are a master at your craft! Thanks for sharing your talent!

To begin with, write because you like to write, not to please others. Secondly, your story was quite fun and would love to hear about Grandma's paddling as well!

Thanks for sharing!

Don,

Really well done, and the humiliation was palpable, but I prefer to keep the sex out of such scenarios. I think it weakens the whole effect of the justice and helplessness of the situation. Just my take, but overall, really enjoyable! Thanks for sharing!

Jim

Dear Goodgulf,

What a wonderful story! When the lady marched her to her room, I would have died right then and there watching her go! Such a great premise, and a great open end to the tale! Thanks for sharing!

Jim

Do not ever judge your talent or success on the ramblings of unknown others. If you get one positive comment it probably represents a thousand. One negative would certainly impact you, so take the few positives as a real plus and write what makes you happy. I, for one, loved your story and thought y...

Wonderful, simply wonderful! Thanks for sharing!

Jim

Wow! I mean, no really... WOW!

Thanks for sharing!

Jim

p.s. WOW!

What more can I ask for than another wonderful chapter, though I fear there are some dark times ahead for our Warrior!

This work really deserves a larger audience and much more praise!

Thank you for sharing it with us!

Jim

Quite frankly, and coming from a once would-be writer myself, one of the best stories I've ever had the pleasure to read. It is smooth, well styled and draws you along like a lamb , only not to slaughter, but to true enjoyment. Wonderful! Well crafted! It should be published and should never end! Ju...